Give some example in paragraph about study tour To some place

At september 4th in 2017, we had a study tour in Bali. We'll improved our english speaking ability. We're counted as 5 classes, one class had 4 small groups. 7 teacher, and 2 guide teacher namely Mrs. Nam and Mr. Park. We have 3 bus. Before we go we gathered in school.

At 06.00 in the morning, all of us gathered in school hall, we had some worship and then breakfast together. At 07.00, we left the school and gone to Tanah Lot. Me and my friends, Chan, Baek, Sehun, Suho, and Chen spoke to many foreign people, they're so nice, after that we took a picture together. We've met a lot of foreign people, they're from many countries, some of them come from Belgium, England, America, and also from China and Korea.

At 09.00 we left Tanah Lot and went to Bedugul. We've interviewed some of foreign people that comes to Bali, and why they choose Bali as they direction. A lot of them answering, because Bali has a lot to see, the views, rich of nature, like its King of Nature. Also, their culture that interest them.

After Tanah Lot and Bedugul theres also a lot of place we went, I cant mentioned it. The last place we went is souvenirs shop, in Khrisna. It's 06.00 p.m. It's almost night. But the people keep walked around like they has no time for tomorrow. We bought a lot of stuff and Bali's souvenirs.

After a long journey we heading back to Hotel had some dinner. And sleep.